M4 Sherman
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« on: August 23, 2008, 06:31:44 pm » |
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This is my first map ever!! This is just a Pre-Release Beta its not nearly done just looking for constructive critism. *This map is not ready for EIR yet, and is in the vcoh stage.(sectoring wise) **I've yet to name the map correctly, but it will come up as Road to Berlin in the map list, and I will be taking name suggestions.    [attachment deleted by admin] |
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Through clever and constant application of propaganda, people can be made to see paradise as hell, and also the other way round, to consider the most wretched sort of life as paradise.
Adolf Hitler
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| Bodybag2224-Armor
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« Reply #1 on: August 23, 2008, 07:22:46 pm » |
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It actually looks pretty good. Over view shot plz.
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| Warbirds
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« Reply #2 on: August 23, 2008, 07:26:20 pm » |
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First screen shot sucks.  Seriously though, it's a shot of nothing much interesting. Second screen shot, use some splats to make the roads 'merge'. They look retarded right now. Also fade out/in with your textures, imo they are to definable on their edges. Third screen shot; I know it's a marsh, or swamp (whatever), but that's too much use grass. |
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| Lolto
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« Reply #3 on: August 23, 2008, 07:36:22 pm » |
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Judging from the few screen-shots... not bad for a first map, will be interesting to see the overall layout.
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| NevyenTLS
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« Reply #4 on: August 23, 2008, 08:35:03 pm » |
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OMG Lolto you exist!!!!! where to fuck have you been?
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| Generic
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« Reply #5 on: August 24, 2008, 12:37:39 am » |
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moar bloom
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| M4 Sherman
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« Reply #6 on: August 24, 2008, 07:56:12 am » |
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I'm not nearly done I'm still adding tons of stuff! Thanks for the tips. I'll make sure to take it to use.
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Kolath
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« Reply #7 on: August 24, 2008, 10:14:33 am » |
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I would fix the roads so that the curb does not continue across the side streets.
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« Reply #8 on: August 24, 2008, 01:30:22 pm » |
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Needs a lot more splats and splines.
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| M4 Sherman
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« Reply #9 on: August 27, 2008, 06:23:25 pm » |
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Bump Adding Map Update 8:00EST
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| salan
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« Reply #10 on: August 27, 2008, 06:27:02 pm » |
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Hey unknown with that first screen shot of the water shouldn't you make him a senior mapper?
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Days of War
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« Reply #11 on: August 27, 2008, 07:13:30 pm » |
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Hey unknown with that first screen shot of the water shouldn't you make him a senior mapper?
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| Lolto
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« Reply #12 on: August 27, 2008, 08:22:51 pm » |
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Hey unknown with that first screen shot of the water shouldn't you make him a senior mapper?
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Unkn0wn
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« Reply #13 on: August 28, 2008, 02:13:17 am » |
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Skunker's was better but I'll take it in consideration :p.
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Days of War
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« Reply #14 on: August 28, 2008, 07:53:13 am » |
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Skunker's was that, copy and pasted, over the entire map.
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| salan
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« Reply #15 on: August 28, 2008, 10:38:15 am » |
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you shall never live it down!
NEVER!
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