Good shoutcast, I would post it on GR.org, so it gets some views.
http://www.gamereplays.org/community/index.php?showforum=1209My comments:
-Make sure you turn down the game audio if you intend on recording your voices directly onto the video.
-If your using ventrillo while recording please turn off your PTT button click, Mal, you had yours on. The clicking gets annoying after awhile.
-You guys are half commentating over the top of each other. What you may be looking at might not be as important as it should be.
- Try building off of your partner's commentary and the camera man needs to be able to follow it better unless you are doing video in video so you can keep an eye on all the action at once.
-Good job explaining reward units and the current strategy. I would try some forecasting every once in awhile instead of doing everything "play by play". We can see already what they are doing and it's your job to "point out" the stuff that the average viewer would miss instead of stating the obvious.
-Again, stop talking over each other. Whatever you saw can wait for a break in the stream of consciousness.
Overall, I like it. Everyone takes some time to get their casts gelling, so just consider these notes as points of improvement.
