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[Unkn0wn]

Really nice Schmidt!

[Tymathee]

so that they show they support minorities,lol

gotta put the token in first for those government subsidies.

[WildZontar]

There are some issues I see with the newsletter, I'll explain on that more when I get home. Overall its pretty good.

[Mister Schmidt]

Don't rain on my parade zontar!

[Spartan_Marine88]

So awesome


keep up the good work

[WildZontar]

I can't believe I am about to use my 10th Grade English to work in this next paragraph.


Most of it is well done for being a first paragraph, and I'll admit, I'd probably do a lot shittier job, but I've noticed a few things that could be fixed for later issues. Your use of concrete detail and commentary, the later paragraphs I've read (RO2, Honeymoon from Hell, Icons) contain a lot of sentences that begin with "I feel, I'm certain" so and so forth. Just make sure you try to space those out more often. My education has taught me usually it goes something like this.

Concrete Detail
Concrete Detail
Commentary
Commentary

Repeat as much as needed.


I hope that make  sense, I've never been good at explaining these type of things.

[Mister Schmidt]

Well, they are my personal views, and it's hardly a serious thing, I'm just foing it for funsies.

[WildZontar]

I know, but if you ever want it to be a serious thing 

[Heartmann]

Hrmmm, maybe shorten it down, introduce some more humor into it and you should be fine, great work, and nice that you want to invest the time and effort!

[smurfORnot]

know what would be cool?
If someone here is 'good' with drawing so he could make small comic for each 'magazine' ...about  how something is OP or UP or something,few pictures and some witty comments in them
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HH7Wy05DsCo - inspiration how it could be done?

OR few screnshoots put together if we dont have 'drawer'?

[Mister Schmidt]

Only one person downloaded the full interview?

Also, enough love to make it a regular thing, or should I give up now?

[TheVolskinator]

Total crap, should delete it and never look back tbh 

[TheIcelandicManiac]

Only one person downloaded the full interview?

Also, enough love to make it a regular thing, or should I give up now?

When you reliced the Newsletter it was not downloadable for a whole day(well i could not download it anyways)

[hans]

why downloading if u can just open it and read it tbh, like i did

or is that also downloading??

[Mister Schmidt]

Think that's just you Icelandic.

And at the bottom of the last page is a link to the full interview with Groundfire, the one in the newsletter misses out a lot.

[tank130]

Think that's just you Icelandic.

And at the bottom of the last page is a link to the full interview with Groundfire, the one in the newsletter misses out a lot.

nooooowww you tell us.....

Edit: oh, that interview wasn't there the first time I read it.

[EIRRMod]

nooooowww you tell us.....

Edit: oh, that interview wasn't there the first time I read it.

Ditto, we got the pre-release version tank ;P

[EIRRMod]

Only one person downloaded the full interview?

Also, enough love to make it a regular thing, or should I give up now?

Oh definately!

Just what kind of timeframe are you looking at, because that was a great read + not tiny like I expected.
(Thats what she said!)

[RoyalHants]

Ahhhhhhhh EIRRmod

<snip but very lol - EIRRMod>

<3

Please dont post unrelated pics anywhere but general discussion - EIRRMod

*Hants* aww sorry EIRRmod saw your joke and thought it was genral discussion

[Mister Schmidt]

Oh definately!

Just what kind of timeframe are you looking at, because that was a great read + not tiny like I expected.
(Thats what she said!)

Uhh well I was going to do it weekly but I'm not sure if I'd get enough content every week to put into it, so I'll probably do it fortnightly instead.